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Fire and Ice

Snowy rocks on fire Ice cold lake lies still below Reflected glory 11th place in 'Sunrise'

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Date: 2/25/2010 12:44:00 PM
Spectacular imagery in your interpretation of this natural wonder, Nick! (Robert Frost had a poem by the same name, so the title caught my eye.) Well done! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:41:00 AM
No greater glory than nature before the eye, nice write Daniel
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:25:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the contest, Nick! Cool imagery! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/15/2010 1:18:00 PM
Very nice! I really liked this. Definitely loved the last line! Congratulations on getting a placement in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2010 12:42:00 PM
very beautiful poem, congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:40:00 AM
nice imagery
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Date: 2/13/2010 6:35:00 PM
Haiku nick this should have placed better congragulations
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Date: 2/13/2010 8:25:00 AM
What an uplifting view! Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/13/2010 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congrats Nick on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a lovely Haiku to describe the photo.. enjoy your victorious moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/13/2010 5:06:00 AM
Nick, your haiku is outstanding! I am so glad to see it in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/12/2010 10:29:00 PM
Nick, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:01:00 PM
Excellet Haiku in this write that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:09:00 AM
Nice Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:36:00 AM
lindas right. it paints a picture in your mind. thatnk you for that comment you made on "{it will follow you" it is one of many "horror" poems that i worte at first. they do seam to come accross to people like that. anyway. wopnderful haiku. i loved it.
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:27:00 AM
A visual Haiku Nick and hope u entered this "beauty" in Raul's new Sunrise contest as it certainly blends with the photograph... luv your title too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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