Fire and Ice

Snowy rocks on fire
Ice cold lake lies still below
Reflected glory








11th place in 'Sunrise'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Spectacular imagery in your interpretation of this natural wonder, Nick! (Robert Frost had a poem by the same name, so the title caught my eye.) Well done! Best Wishes, Carolyn
Cheeseman Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:41 AM
No greater glory than nature before the eye, nice write Daniel
Haick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 8:25 PM
My congratulations on your win in the contest, Nick! Cool imagery! Peace, Audrey
Augustus Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Very nice! I really liked this. Definitely loved the last line! Congratulations on getting a placement in the contest.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:42 PM
very beautiful poem, congrats on the win.
Palli Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:40 AM
nice imagery
Beam Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Haiku nick this should have placed better congragulations
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February 13, 2010 at 8:25 AM
What an uplifting view! Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Nick. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Congrats Nick on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a lovely Haiku to describe the photo.. enjoy your victorious moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Nick, your haiku is outstanding! I am so glad to see it in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
Moreno Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 10:29 PM
Nick, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Excellet Haiku in this write that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Hilliker Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Nice Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Brown Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:36 AM
lindas right. it paints a picture in your mind. thatnk you for that comment you made on "{it will follow you" it is one of many "horror" poems that i worte at first. they do seam to come accross to people like that. anyway. wopnderful haiku. i loved it.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 5:27 AM
A visual Haiku Nick and hope u entered this "beauty" in Raul's new Sunrise contest as it certainly blends with the photograph... luv your title too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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