Fire

JWE, my uncle, helped me write this amazing song! Hope you all like it and you can comment if you want to~

You seem to go away
You dream day by day
You put me out like fire
You are my burning desire that I deeply desire
Despite your ire and when you call me a liar

I am distressed by your fire 
The fire within your soul's elegant empire
I am the only one you desire
You are a part of me that I can't snip off like an important wire

You are a scorching fire...fire...
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are as bright as the sun
You are my soul's hidden desire
You are the day that has just begun
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are a scorching fire...fire..
You fire me up in my icy, lonely castle
You are my soul's elegant empire
You make me feel whole 
While I collide into this bottomless hole
And I'm on fire...
And I'm on fire...

You gleam like the stars
You heal my past scars
You put me out like fire
You are my burning fire that lifts me higher
And higher and higher and higher

I am distressed by your fire 
The fire within your soul's elegant empire
I am the only one you desire
You are a part of me that I can't snip off like an important wire

You are a scorching fire...fire...
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are as bright as the sun
You are my soul's hidden desire
You are the day that has just begun
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are a scorching fire...fire..
You fire me up in my icy, lonely castle
You are my soul's elegant empire
You make me feel whole 
While I collide into this bottomless hole
And I'm on fire...
And I'm on fire...

I'm on fire
You're my desire
That I admire
I'm on fire
Our love will never tire...
Never tire...
I'm on fire
Our eternal glee will never retire
I'm on fire
Our love is a fire
That lifts me higher and higher
I'm on fire
You dream a dream you desire
We're on fire

I am distressed by your fire 
The fire within your soul's elegant empire
I am the only one you desire
You are a part of me that I can't snip off like an important wire

You are a scorching fire...fire...
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are as bright as the sun
You are my soul's hidden desire
You are the day that has just begun
And I'm on fire
And I'm on fire
You are a scorching fire...fire..
You fire me up in my icy, lonely castle
You are my soul's elegant empire
You make me feel whole 
While I collide into this bottomless hole
And I'm on fire...
And I'm on fire...

I am distressed by your fire 
The fire within your soul's elegant empire
I am the only one you desire
You are a part of me that I can't snip off like an important wire

You seem to go astray
You always want to go away
You are a stream that never stays put
We stick our feet into the waters barefoot
You put me out like fire
You put me out like fire
You lift me higher and I'm on fire
I lift you up higher and you're on fire
We ascend above the fire 
It's below us now - let's go higher
And we're on fire
And we're on fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/8/2020 6:40:00 AM
that is some journey.. full of passionate writing.. brilliant stuff.
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