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Finnegan's Travels

Well hello Mister Finnegan You've come back as a friend again It's been so long since we've seen you Don't you know Mister Finnegan All your bad luck will end again And nothing will get between you For we know that you'll win again Our dear Mister Finnegan The luck of the Irish is on you And don't you ever sin again Oh dear Mister Finnegan The eyes of God are upon you But please Mister Finnegan Beware of those men again We hope no frown will befall you Now farewell Mister Finnegan How lovely it's been again When next in town yes we'll call you

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Date: 3/7/2024 6:52:00 PM
Hello Robert, Your poem captivates the essence of resilience and hope amidst life’s trials. The rhythm dances with optimism, promising redemption and renewal for Mister Finnegan. The imagery evokes warmth and camaraderie, showing us of the power of friendship and faith. Your words speak ofcourage in the face of adversity. Bravo on crafting such a moving piece. Blessings, Daniel
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Randy Freie
Date: 3/7/2024 6:57:00 PM
Hi Daniel, I appreciate the feedback, but my name's Randy not Robert. That's ok, I've been called worse.

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