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Finished

crushed hopes bitter defeat flattened ant disillusionment all is lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/5/2015 10:10:00 PM
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ROBIN* I enjoyed reading this poem, Thank you for sharing. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 5/18/2012 5:06:00 AM
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A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Robin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/14/2012 7:39:00 PM
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Welcome to the Soup!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/14/2012 7:38:00 PM
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Again, your language, and the imagery you have created are fantastic! AGAIN, well done!! Keith
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/15/2012 4:42:00 PM
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Keith. robinwrennfiore
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:14:00 AM
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it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/14/2012 11:17:00 AM
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thank you, prince.
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/14/2012 4:20:00 AM
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Thank you very much
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W. D. Thomas
Date: 5/13/2012 12:00:00 PM
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Welcome. Hope you enjoy PS. Keep up the good work.
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Ms.Erica Jackson
Date: 5/13/2012 1:40:00 AM
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YOU SHATTERED THE ILLUSION ... CUTE , I like it ;)
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/13/2012 5:30:00 AM
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thanks!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 5/12/2012 11:57:00 AM
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steam iron hope,all is not lost,have faith,LOL,I love this poem
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/12/2012 4:44:00 PM
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not as much as I loved your poem. Excellent!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/11/2012 9:19:00 PM
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Poor ant!! Yes, you described the title very well, Robin!
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/12/2012 6:34:00 AM
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thank you very much for commenting. I think that we have all been that "ant."
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Amy Green
Date: 5/11/2012 5:33:00 PM
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17 syllables- indeed... form?
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
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That would explain my acerbic wit, ha!...thanks for the chuckle
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Amy Green
Date: 5/12/2012 1:49:00 PM
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"MINE", she says- now THAT is the 1 word I love coming from someone- GREAT... that is saying, "Don't question me"! U got all my respect!
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Robin Wrenn-Fiore
Date: 5/11/2012 5:36:00 PM
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mine

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