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Robin Wrenn-Fiore

Finished

crushed hopes

bitter defeat

flattened ant

disillusionment

all is lost

Copyright © Robin Wrenn-Fiore | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

July 5, 2015 at 10:10 PM

ROBIN* I enjoyed reading this poem, Thank you for sharing. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2012 at 5:06 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Robin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 7:39 PM

Welcome to the Soup!

Keith Bickerstaffe

May 14, 2012 at 7:38 PM

Again, your language, and the imagery you have created are fantastic! AGAIN, well done!! Keith

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 15, 2012 at 4:42 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Keith. robinwrennfiore

Prince Ekpemandu

May 14, 2012 at 7:14 AM

it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 14, 2012 at 11:17 AM

thank you, prince.

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 14, 2012 at 4:20 AM

Thank you very much

May 13, 2012 at 12:00 PM

Welcome. Hope you enjoy PS. Keep up the good work.

Ms.Erica Jackson

May 13, 2012 at 1:40 AM

YOU SHATTERED THE ILLUSION ... CUTE , I like it ;)

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 13, 2012 at 5:30 AM

thanks!

May 12, 2012 at 11:57 AM

steam iron hope,all is not lost,have faith,LOL,I love this poem

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 12, 2012 at 4:44 PM

not as much as I loved your poem. Excellent!

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2012 at 9:19 PM

Poor ant!! Yes, you described the title very well, Robin!

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 12, 2012 at 6:34 AM

thank you very much for commenting. I think that we have all been that "ant."

May 11, 2012 at 5:33 PM

17 syllables- indeed... form?

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 13, 2012 at 9:23 AM

That would explain my acerbic wit, ha!...thanks for the chuckle

May 12, 2012 at 1:49 PM

"MINE", she says- now THAT is the 1 word I love coming from someone- GREAT... that is saying, "Don't question me"! U got all my respect!

Robin Wrenn-Fiore

May 11, 2012 at 5:36 PM

mine

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