Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

Fingerprints---Senryu

     




              Fingerprints, my child.
              Artwork,everywhere, so mild.
              Dreams of days lost, wild.


                           3/18/2021
                              ~2~ 

                        Rhymed Senryu

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Robert L. Hinshaw March 19, 2021 at 5:00 PM Pangie, you have mastered the composition of the senryu! Another wonderful verse from your very versatile quill ! Bob Panagiota Romios March 20, 2021 at 8:18 AM Bob, I learned this form elsewhere and I Really like it. I don't feel at home with Unrhymed haikus. Many great Poets here can pen those, don't you agree? Thank you for your time and friendship. Pangie 3/20/2021

Darlene De Beaulieu March 19, 2021 at 3:50 PM Hello Panangiota, finger prints on a wall of a child's room would be delightful for the child. Because the child's fingerprints would be their. Hugs Darlene xx Panagiota Romios March 21, 2021 at 7:59 AM Oh, a missing reply? How nutty because I did! Kids put fingerprints everywhere. As they start to walk, fingerprints on walls, glass doors,furniture.....refrigerator doors. Kids are not confined to a room, once they are mobile.they leave forever fingerprints on your heart. Hugs, Pangie zz Darlene De Beaulieu March 20, 2021 at 3:25 PM Hello Panagiota, yes i did comment. Hugs Darlene. I am glad I did to. Panagiota Romios March 20, 2021 at 8:14 AM Darlene! I think ghosts are chasing us.))) I found your comment And NO reply button?? So I PRESSED EDIT , and a reply box came into view. Yaaa. Kids put fingerprints everywhere, no kidding. It's part of growing up. They grow up way toofast. Glad, glad that you commented. Hugs Pangie 3/20/2001.??

Carolyn Devonshire March 19, 2021 at 1:20 PM In our state they put the handprints of children on the walls of the Capitol when International Children's Day arrives. Lovely senryu, Panagiota! Hugs, Carolyn Panagiota Romios March 20, 2021 at 8:07 AM Caroyn, what a beautiful idea and a tribute to children. I can tell you love them. A good sign, Thank you for stopping by. In appreciation, Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2021 at 12:27 PM - Smile ... they leave their mark ... lovely written, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Panagiota Romios March 20, 2021 at 8:04 AM Hello, Anne Lise...love fingerprints. It's too soon, out tykes grow up. Thank you, Hugs, Pangie

Regina Mcintosh March 19, 2021 at 5:44 AM Beautifully done. Love it... God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Panagiota Romios March 19, 2021 at 9:24 AM Reginam hi! I am so glad when a poet is unafraid to say they like a poem. I consider that a real gift, wrapped it ribbon. Hugs, Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham March 19, 2021 at 1:32 AM Reminds me of those fingerprint paintings parents do when their kids are born then for the next few years are wiping windows and walls, cleaning up after them. Lol. Tom Panagiota Romios March 19, 2021 at 9:22 AM Lol, Tom. You got that one right....))))? Hugs, Pangie xxx

Caren Krutsinger March 18, 2021 at 8:18 PM Never lost when you have your imagination, your memories and your mighty pen! Panagiota Romios March 19, 2021 at 9:19 AM Love, love, the way you put this Caren! Perfect.. Hugs,Pangie xx

Judy Ball March 18, 2021 at 6:39 PM Ah the marks left on the walls that bring back memories, the fingerprints left on your heart, irreplaceable. Nice job Pangie. God Bless, JB Panagiota Romios March 19, 2021 at 9:18 AM Hello Judy! Those fingerprints, ah, Judy, so precious. I still have grandsons's toys, drawings, bibs, utensils and more. These keep me happy when I am alone. He's off to High school in September...but I have so many movements to remember.. Finger prints on the heart as you said. Hugs, Pangia xx