Finger On the Pulse

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soul gazing into the spiritual reality 

There is a transformation taking place
where the human condition is now lacking
In complete understanding we hunger
and thirst for righteousness to take proper shape
these words internally ring a bell
Why are you persecuting me
knowing the difference between wise and foolish
in the middle of hot and cold opinionated reactions
Those responding with hate attack love venomously 
they try to delete truth replacing it with lies
forgiveness has this infinite wisdom and mercy
To double cross the victims courage
injustice has buried something greater
the voices of the innocent will never be silenced

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/16/2020 7:57:00 PM
An intense and powerful write, Liam.. Sad and true, my friend.. You penned an amazing write filled with depth and meaning! Have a blessed New Year!
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Date: 1/16/2020 7:39:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Very powerful, n' sad poem you've written my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)Liam, Satan has his evil agenda, BUT God has the Greatest Plan for mankind.With our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O
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