Fine Tuning

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For I've not a jealous chord in my ~~body, even though it plays ~~out-of-tune.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/13/2019 7:51:00 AM

Yes--it needs tuning from time to time for all of us..well said, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thanks again Vijay for your input, Aloha William

Sand Blown

Date: 6/13/2019 1:34:00 AM

good write...now that describes a piano jazz group i heard where-in the drummer played a quite background that sounded exactly like people somewhere in the room talking quietly in time to a piano...exquisite sounds man : )

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2019 8:01:00 AM

You have my thanks my friend, Aloha William