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For I've not
a jealous
chord
in my

   ~~body, 

even though
it plays

   ~~out-of-tune.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/13/2019 7:51:00 AM
Yes--it needs tuning from time to time for all of us..well said, William.
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/13/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay for your input, Aloha William
Date: 6/13/2019 1:34:00 AM
good write...now that describes a piano jazz group i heard where-in the drummer played a quite background that sounded exactly like people somewhere in the room talking quietly in time to a piano...exquisite sounds man : )
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/13/2019 8:01:00 AM
You have my thanks my friend, Aloha William