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Fine Line

Fine Line A fine line between madness and sane, Sometimes I wonder which side I am playing, The rhyming goes on, it rattles her name, which side am I playing, sidestep the insane, I look at the women, they don’t see me pass, Guess I’m just made of that, see through glass, Rhymes they keep coming, they misspell my name, Who is that bugger, that talks in the brain? The doctors can’t tell me, am I insane, I break into chuckles, when I hear my name, Too late I am doubting , the looks of disdain, Sometimes on the one side, the other again. 24-sep-11
Nancy Jones Contest Name Fine Line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/26/2011 6:56:00 AM
Soup seems to be a little sickly?
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Date: 9/24/2011 9:58:00 AM
Great job Don. Tony
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Date: 9/24/2011 7:10:00 AM
beautiful....love the first two lines...
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Date: 9/24/2011 6:00:00 AM
this is really nice.best of luck.
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