Fine Line

Fine Line A fine line between madness and sane, Sometimes I wonder which side I am playing, The rhyming goes on, it rattles her name, which side am I playing, sidestep the insane, I look at the women, they don’t see me pass, Guess I’m just made of that, see through glass, Rhymes they keep coming, they misspell my name, Who is that bugger, that talks in the brain? The doctors can’t tell me, am I insane, I break into chuckles, when I hear my name, Too late I am doubting , the looks of disdain, Sometimes on the one side, the other again. 24-sep-11
Nancy Jones Contest Name Fine Line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Soup seems to be a little sickly?
Lane Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Great job Don. Tony
Ekpemandu Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 7:10 AM
beautiful....love the first two lines...
Francis Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 6:00 AM
this is really nice.best of luck.
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