Gordon Mcconnell Poet Rhyme

Finding Your Dark Secret Within

Life has a way of playing games
hiding reality by my blindspot
walk along in life's dark dungeon
looking for the keys since in my cot

This dark dungeon is real deep
each step down is really so dark
unknown and fearful is my plight
wondering where next is no lark

Every waking day stays the same
looking for brighter days in hope
but they don't seem to bring change
renewed strength so that I can cope

One looks for that glimmer of light
just to see that dot way in the dark
keep focused to find that goal
till it breaks through as your spark

Finding your dark secret within
it's so very deep way down there
waiting for your rescue to appear
hold in there, wait for clear air

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Panagiota Romios January 5, 2023 at 10:46 PM Hi Gordon! Just the poem, whose message I needed to hear. Thank you very much God Bless You. Panagiota Gordon Mcconnell January 6, 2023 at 2:43 AM Thanks Panagiota, Glad you enjoyed this one and it was ideal for you at this moment. Blessings always, Gordon

Speaks Volumes January 4, 2023 at 3:29 PM May all your breaths be comprised of the freshest sweet air Gordon. Its true we must take the darkness we have been dealt and use it to make us stronger and bring us to the light. .... A super poem. Gordon Mcconnell January 5, 2023 at 4:56 AM Thanks Wendy, Glad you enjoyed this piece and totally agree with your sentiments. Hope all is well with you, blessings always,Gordon

Joanna Daniel January 4, 2023 at 6:38 AM Sometimes life gives us darkness to deal with, so that we can look to God, the living light, beautiful poem, Gordon:) Gordon Mcconnell January 4, 2023 at 11:09 AM Thanks Jo, Glad you enjoyed this one and truly agree with your thoughts. Have a great and blessed 2023. Blessings always,Gordon

Tom Cunningham January 4, 2023 at 12:06 AM Once that's all there was, darkness, but he created the light for us. Only by following it will it lead us to salvation. Hope your new year is off to a good start Gordon. Tom Gordon Mcconnell January 4, 2023 at 12:54 AM Thanks Tom, Glad you liked this one, and indeed only God's light can guide us through life. Trust you're life is going well too, blessings, Gordon