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Finding Your Dark Secret Within

Life has a way of playing games hiding reality by my blindspot walk along in life's dark dungeon looking for the keys since in my cot This dark dungeon is real deep each step down is really so dark unknown and fearful is my plight wondering where next is no lark Every waking day stays the same looking for brighter days in hope but they don't seem to bring change renewed strength so that I can cope One looks for that glimmer of light just to see that dot way in the dark keep focused to find that goal till it breaks through as your spark Finding your dark secret within it's so very deep way down there waiting for your rescue to appear hold in there, wait for clear air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/5/2023 10:46:00 PM
Hi Gordon! Just the poem, whose message I needed to hear. Thank you very much God Bless You. Panagiota
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/6/2023 2:43:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota, Glad you enjoyed this one and it was ideal for you at this moment. Blessings always, Gordon
Date: 1/4/2023 3:29:00 PM
May all your breaths be comprised of the freshest sweet air Gordon. Its true we must take the darkness we have been dealt and use it to make us stronger and bring us to the light. .... A super poem.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/5/2023 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, Glad you enjoyed this piece and totally agree with your sentiments. Hope all is well with you, blessings always,Gordon
Date: 1/4/2023 6:38:00 AM
Sometimes life gives us darkness to deal with, so that we can look to God, the living light, beautiful poem, Gordon:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/4/2023 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Jo, Glad you enjoyed this one and truly agree with your thoughts. Have a great and blessed 2023. Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 1/4/2023 12:06:00 AM
Once that's all there was, darkness, but he created the light for us. Only by following it will it lead us to salvation. Hope your new year is off to a good start Gordon. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/4/2023 12:54:00 AM
Thanks Tom, Glad you liked this one, and indeed only God's light can guide us through life. Trust you're life is going well too, blessings, Gordon

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