Finding Perfect Love

Finding perfect love takes more than effort and grit,
it's like seeking a needle hidden in a heap of hay;
lucky you, if you can find it on a very sunny day...
when that joy is captured and held into your firm grip. 


Finding a rare rose without thorns isn't very easy,
it's like seeking a needle hidden in a heap of hay;
at first, you may suddenly give up and be lonesome again,
but what would you gain, if all your search were done in vain?


Finding a faithful heart among those that love to cheat,
it's like seeking a needle hidden in a heap of the hay;
don't choose a narrow road and straddle on your feet...
take chances when nothing can turn into hard clay.  


Finding perfect love is not loving foolishly and then quickly cleave,  
it's like seeking a needle hidden in a heap of hay;
why wait for a rainbow...if the storm has gone away?
Change yourself and be that someone who promises not to leave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Good advice.......an excellent write Andrew.
D. Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 6:05 AM
good advice if only people would take it
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