Finding Peace

Alone where waterfalls pour long into streams
Nature beckons with its tranquility
I'll free my spirit, allow for its dreams
My soul lays down to find serenity

contest Rithimus Divisa
sponsor Gregory R Barden
originally from the poem Deep in Nature
5/19/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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October 12, 2020 at 8:04 AM
So much imagery in only four lines.. You did this so well...
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October 11, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Very pretty, Frederic - very visceral. Somehow the sound of a waterfall does bring peace to our souls. Really lovely. Best wishes for the contest.
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October 10, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Oh I love this. Beautiful Frederic. A FAV for me :)
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