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Finding Ms Right

He had been engaged several times but never had the heart to get hitched There had been quite a few near Mrs. But so far he was not so enriched Then one day he discovered Ms. right He was married after so many years It was such an emotional time Even the wedding cake was in tiers. Then one day they had a baby boy This was her last birthing endeavor They named him "Ever" after her dad And then lived happily after Ever!

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Date: 1/24/2018 8:22:00 AM
I love the humor in this finely frosted write Pat; may they live happily after Ever and have little tiers throughout the years!~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/25/2018 8:59:00 AM
Aww! Thank you Cheryl!!
Date: 1/23/2018 5:17:00 PM
ha ha ha i'm with Dale on the wedding cake in tiers line -fabulous humour pat:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 1/23/2018 12:25:00 PM
"near Mrs" and "cake in tiers" are hilarious and amazingly clever!
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/23/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Dale!

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