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Finding Life's Grace

Birds gone astray on whirlwind’s spray, forlorn my way down avenue Then moonlight’s trace sparks newborn grace-- as couples race to feel bright dew. Desiderata of Nette Onclaud from Jajosh Ongado Dec 5, 2014--- Theme #3

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:07:00 PM
JAJOSH, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/17/2014 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved great win and wonderful piece my dear friend! Hug and cheers! Thank you for sharing! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:40:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations on your win Jajosh
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:51:00 AM
wow,this is magical, profound, and i read it again and again, each time being enchanted anew, jajosh.. a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
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Date: 12/15/2014 5:52:00 AM
Well done Jajosh! You tackled this form with clarity of thought and smooth technical flow. Congratulations on finishing first in this contest...very much deserved win. // paul
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:00:00 PM
What a beauty this is Jajosh. It is unique and a joy to read. It deserves top honors. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:12:00 PM
Well done, congrats
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:32:00 PM
This is so lovely! Congrats on your winning poem, Jajosh!
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Date: 12/14/2014 11:21:00 AM
Just superlatively beautiful and deserving of its top win! Congratulations, Jajosh!
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:43:00 AM
what a lovely way to do this challenge. Congrats on your beautiful poem's top win.
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:28:00 AM
simply beautiful many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:11:00 AM
The title just takes my breath away and the poem absolutely beautiful...congratulations
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:16:00 AM
The poem deserves the first place, congrats on the win, Jajosh
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful write Jajosh! Congrats on much deserved first place win !
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Jajosh,this is fantastic...huggs
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