Finding Life's Grace

Birds gone astray
on whirlwind’s spray,
forlorn  my way
down avenue

Then  moonlight’s  trace
sparks newborn  grace--
as couples race
to feel bright dew.




from Jajosh Ongafo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 9:07 PM
JAJOSH, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
Gasun Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved great win and wonderful piece my dear friend! Hug and cheers! Thank you for sharing! love lots, Leonora
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December 16, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations on your win Jajosh
Onclaud Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:51 AM
wow,this is magical, profound, and i read it again and again, each time being enchanted anew, jajosh.. a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
Callus Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Well done Jajosh! You tackled this form with clarity of thought and smooth technical flow. Congratulations on finishing first in this contest...very much deserved win. // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 10:00 PM
What a beauty this is Jajosh. It is unique and a joy to read. It deserves top honors. Congratulations!
Lawless Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:12 PM
Well done, congrats
Richards Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:32 PM
This is so lovely! Congrats on your winning poem, Jajosh!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Just superlatively beautiful and deserving of its top win! Congratulations, Jajosh!
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 10:43 AM
what a lovely way to do this challenge. Congrats on your beautiful poem's top win.
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:28 AM
simply beautiful many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Jones Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:11 AM
The title just takes my breath away and the poem absolutely beautiful...congratulations
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:16 AM
The poem deserves the first place, congrats on the win, Jajosh
A. Sharma Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Wonderful write Jajosh! Congrats on much deserved first place win !
Kayode Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:43 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Jajosh,this is fantastic...huggs
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