Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

- Finding God -

She carries on a dream
    a dream that will take place in a beautiful glimpse

    That the rock will overflow with cream
    Hearts will be opened by the colorful light beams

    The dream and the doors opened tidal stream
    Desire is divine ... looking, she feel like scream

    One way she does not know ... a strange feeling
    The dream, heart, and the mountain redeems

    She found her savior, her God - believe in your dreams





     A-L Andresen : 09.08.2014

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    Sponsor:Gail Angel Doyle 
    Contest Name:Finding God 
    

    - Thank you for my 11th place in the contest :)

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 25, 2014 at 8:48 AM Awesome, Anne Lise. Your poem purifies the mind. Love...rajat Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 9:07 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Rajat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aubrey Brown September 30, 2014 at 11:03 PM Beautifully written. I love your writing style in this. very mysterious yet revealing. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2014 at 2:24 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Aubrey - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Helen Grace Balisi September 5, 2014 at 10:41 PM Hello Anne Lise??... I love this one...It is beautiful written - from the depth of your soul...Keep inspiring people through your writings! Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2014 at 3:43 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, Helen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos August 27, 2014 at 9:07 AM Exquisitel beautiful - congratulations on a wonderful win! Pandita Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Thompson August 18, 2014 at 7:30 PM Lovely Anne Lise, I enjoyed your poem and it's unique style. Take care my friend, Jess :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2014 at 3:57 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Jessica - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso August 16, 2014 at 8:26 PM Well now I have to say it Anne Lise, not only is this beautiful, but you have a unique style and way with words thats always paints such a vivid imagine and always brings me a smile, Your ability to pick so many topics and say such beautiful prose is well inspiring! Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2014 at 4:07 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Arthur - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian August 16, 2014 at 4:13 PM amazing poem, its wonderful when people find God for the first time., thanks for your kind comments and support here on soup. its always appriciated. xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 17, 2014 at 4:07 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Diane - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan August 15, 2014 at 7:32 PM Anne Lie that is such a beautiful poem, in my opinion you should have got a higher than 11th, so well written and understandable, take care my dear and have a lovely weekend..............Vera........... Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2014 at 5:00 AM - It is not so important for me ..... Enter to the contest for fun ...... win or "loss" with a smile :) - But it was nice said, dear Vera. - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2014 at 12:09 PM here again for the applause, anne.. sweet congrats and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 12:27 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson August 14, 2014 at 9:03 PM Congratulations, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2014 at 3:38 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 14, 2014 at 7:44 AM A lovely poem on finding God. Yes God helps inner peace to last forever. Wow. Soo nice to read u again. Warmest hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 11:38 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, S.Z.K. - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ettie Christian-Bowling August 13, 2014 at 3:01 PM A great poem this is:)-Love Ettie Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 3:05 PM - Ettie, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock August 13, 2014 at 11:36 AM A wonderful poem about finding God. Well done and congrats on the win. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 12:20 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda August 13, 2014 at 9:25 AM Indeed Anne-Lise... we need to believe in our Savior God and live our dreams through Him. Beautiful and serene... thank you for comments on my "Carpe Diem" poem. Yes... Robin Williams was a legendary actor-- now moved neighborhoods to live with His savior in heaven. Xx~Xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 10:53 AM - Kim, thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak August 13, 2014 at 8:27 AM Absolutely stunningly beautiful!!!!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 8:41 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, my friend Monterey - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 13, 2014 at 7:11 AM Lovely n serene is this write Anne Lise, loved much! Congrats on fine win! Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 7:13 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr.Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ochieng Adipo August 13, 2014 at 6:56 AM A really BEAUTIFUL piece! A beautiful dream indeed. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 7:03 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, Ochieng - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2014 at 1:36 AM Congrats on the win on Finding God, Anne. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 4:22 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley August 12, 2014 at 9:32 PM Congrats on your win, Anne Lise!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 4:22 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless August 12, 2014 at 6:24 PM Congrats on the win Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 4:21 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, John :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 12, 2014 at 3:22 PM i knew this would be in the winners' list, anne... simply divine and sweet congrats on fantastic win!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 4:21 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 12, 2014 at 2:38 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2014 at 4:20 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2014 at 11:31 AM more dreams to you today, anne.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2014 at 2:11 AM - Enjoyable ............... :) huggs :)

Lucilla Carrillo August 11, 2014 at 7:32 AM This is good Anne Lise. We can all find God if we really look for him. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for the visit... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2014 at 7:54 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Lucilla - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2014 at 5:35 AM Enjoyed reading this one today..Glad that I chose it to read..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, plastic is real(Ha! Ha!) in a sense but not the flesh and blood real..Amazing how when we get a little age on us things look different from a distance..Many things trick the eye..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2014 at 6:17 AM - Really glad you enjoyed my little write :- Finding God -, dear Sara - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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