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Finding a Little Piece of Heaven

Out of a hat I just pulled you from the grapevine hanging flower of flowers petals beg to kiss In one taste bursting flavors of fruit drunken wine of everlasting beauty Just licking lips blushing desire one bite addicted you're the apple of Eden Finding paradise that was lost fate plays a vital hand alone outside of this world it controls destines gate Within regal dreams an angel touches the heart where a soul flies uniting together shines one bright light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/10/2015 3:15:00 PM
A very good write
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:34:00 PM
soothing, fond read, liam... i like this.. huggs
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Date: 8/30/2015 7:33:00 PM
I always invite a lady to find a little piece of heaven, but not many come home with me to find it! :) On a more serious note, very romantically Irish poem! loved it!
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Date: 8/30/2015 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful and I love the last line my friend...cheers Tim
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Date: 8/30/2015 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful. Last stanza my fav. Be blessed
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Date: 8/30/2015 5:54:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling! So very beautifully written!I truly enjoy it!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy,romantic,sweet enchanting love piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true golden gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so happy to see you posting again and I pray,hope that you're okay, Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/30/2015 5:44:00 PM
Beautiful poem Liam !!! - hugs// Anne-Lise :)
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