Finding a Little Piece of Heaven

Out of a hat I just pulled you from the grapevine 
hanging flower of flowers petals beg to kiss

In one taste bursting flavors of fruit 
drunken wine of everlasting beauty 

Just licking lips blushing desire
one bite addicted you're the apple of Eden 

Finding paradise that was lost fate plays a vital hand 
alone outside of this world it controls destines gate

Within regal dreams an angel touches the heart
where a soul flies uniting together shines one bright light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Zubair Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:15 PM
A very good write
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:34 PM
soothing, fond read, liam... i like this.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:33 PM
I always invite a lady to find a little piece of heaven, but not many come home with me to find it! :) On a more serious note, very romantically Irish poem! loved it!
Smith Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Beautiful and I love the last line my friend...cheers Tim
Hunjeri Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Beautiful. Last stanza my fav. Be blessed
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling! So very beautifully written!I truly enjoy it!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy,romantic,sweet enchanting love piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true golden gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so happy to see you posting again and I pray,hope that you're okay, Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Beautiful poem Liam !!! - hugs// Anne-Lise :)
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