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Disstracted Streched over quick-sand Train haywire Confustion starts Nervous wreck? Trouble understanding Focused Eyes sparkle Defeat pain Interdependant Creative Assertive

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Date: 3/10/2011 11:48:00 AM
I really like the way you show contrasting feelings in the work you've been posting lately, Joshua. Stress leaves us so distracted we can bearly think. It is when we are calm that our inner muse inspires creative writes like this. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn
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