Find the Focus

Disstracted
Streched over quick-sand
Train haywire
Confustion starts
Nervous wreck?
Trouble understanding

Focused
Eyes sparkle
Defeat pain
Interdependant
Creative
Assertive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 10, 2011 at 11:48 AM
I really like the way you show contrasting feelings in the work you've been posting lately, Joshua. Stress leaves us so distracted we can bearly think. It is when we are calm that our inner muse inspires creative writes like this. Very nice work! Love, Carolyn
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