Find Me In Six-Beneath the Waves

Find me beneath the waves of time
Floating endlessly in the dark
I struggle with life's paradigm
Hear motion of its clock hands mark
This ticking of time I can't flee
In the end my death will find me

1/18/17
Find Me in Six
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:15 AM
It will in deed find us all my friend. Keep writing till the end!! Big congrats!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Coming back with my congrats on this gem!
Warrior Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...god bless...^WW^
Carmack Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:36 PM
I like the mood of this, that half empty glass with a crack in it. Congrats.
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic Hugs
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Aye...we surely cannot escape the ticking of time, Frederic! Those waves have no mercy. Congratulations on your deserved win. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 2:22 PM
deeply lyrical, frederick so well impressed in my heart.. big congrats on your win and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 9:41 PM
a very powerful one on death and mortality, Frederic. I like it a lot.
Lawless Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 7:32 PM
...as it will find us all Frederic.
Yvonne Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 2:08 PM
A beautiful poem on the passing of time and our eventual demise. Impressive as is all your poetry.
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