Find Me In Six Before I Disappear

HAPPINESS
                    Find me soon, I am gonna hide myself
                    I stay next to you,since your time of birth
                    like waves of ocean,to hug and kiss you
                  But you've failed to perceive me all the years
                  It's time to leave now,still there's a last chance
                    Before I drown in you,come and find me

 
Jan 19 2017
For the contest FIND ME IN SIX by Nette onclaud
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Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Back to say, Congrats for your win.
Singh Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 3:23 AM
congrats!
Gasun Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:32 AM
Amazing! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Hugs!
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:13 PM
This is very lovely, Supraja. Happiness is always there, waiting to be embraced...it's just that we don't realize it! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 4:15 PM
...back again; I have just read your comment to Victor down below; seems like I echoed what you said:)
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 2:59 PM
ohh , i felt so light after reading this, supraja.... sweet congrats and thanks for participating.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 3:49 PM
a very unique take on the theme, and Nette loves uniqueness! I sure enjoyed this, Supraja.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Happiness eludes not because of her being unwilling to embrace us but because we are unable to perceive it even if is before our eyes! Excellent dearest , Supraja! I am certain happiness will not escape your attention! A seven!
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