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Find Me In Six Before I Disappear

HAPPINESS Find me soon, I am gonna hide myself I stay next to you,since your time of birth like waves of ocean,to hug and kiss you But you've failed to perceive me all the years It's time to leave now,still there's a last chance Before I drown in you,come and find me Jan 19 2017 For the contest FIND ME IN SIX by Nette onclaud

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Date: 1/22/2017 1:03:00 PM
Back to say, Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/22/2017 3:23:00 AM
congrats!
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Date: 1/22/2017 12:32:00 AM
Amazing! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Hugs!
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:13:00 PM
This is very lovely, Supraja. Happiness is always there, waiting to be embraced...it's just that we don't realize it! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:15:00 PM
...back again; I have just read your comment to Victor down below; seems like I echoed what you said:)
Date: 1/21/2017 2:59:00 PM
ohh , i felt so light after reading this, supraja.... sweet congrats and thanks for participating.. huggs
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:49:00 PM
a very unique take on the theme, and Nette loves uniqueness! I sure enjoyed this, Supraja.
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:20:00 AM
Happiness eludes not because of her being unwilling to embrace us but because we are unable to perceive it even if is before our eyes! Excellent dearest , Supraja! I am certain happiness will not escape your attention! A seven!
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