Winged Warrior Poet Verse

Find Me At Six-Oceans Deep

Find Me At Six-Oceans Deep

Find me...within the oceans deep
Where my swallowed soul lies asleep
Wake me before more tears are shed
To calm the oceans for they spread
The water weeps for I can not flee
I beg, make haste come and...find me.



Jan.18.2017
FIND ME AT SIX - Contest
Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Teddy Kimathi January 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM Congrats WW, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2017 at 12:59 PM very nicely done, Winged WArrior!! Big congrats for your win.

Joseph May January 22, 2017 at 10:49 AM Congrats on your win

Janis Medders Tobechi January 21, 2017 at 10:08 PM I love the swallowed soul imagery. Congrats and God bless, Janis.

Eve Roper January 21, 2017 at 9:22 PM Nice verse congratulations on your win , ^WW^

Paul Callus January 21, 2017 at 3:46 PM Congratulations on a much deserved win, WW. Those sad tears definitely touch the reader's heart! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud January 21, 2017 at 2:38 PM from start to end, you delivered this with depth, WW... sweet congrats on your amazing spot and thanks for joining..huggs

Jan Allison January 18, 2017 at 10:28 AM Such deep sad imagery in your poem ^WW^ I do like your interpretation of the image:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7