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Find a Place In Your Heart

He could not find a place in his heart, for him to love me. What's the use of having a heart when all you feel is pain. I have waited for him to love me, to give my love a chance. He has left my heart outside in the cold, looking for him, as he slips away in the distance. He could not find a place in his heart for me, could not see himself giving me his heart or loving me. What is the use of having a heart, when you feel pain everytime it beats, when you struggle with every breath that you take, because he took his love away.

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Date: 1/3/2012 5:49:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Char. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:14:00 AM
Char welcome to the soup, I have read your poems lost love is hard to handle..David
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Date: 12/29/2011 9:00:00 PM
I am impressed by this poem's honesty, and really feel that I can relate!
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