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Asphyxiated, try not to choke The bridges I've burnt are bellowing smoke Cutting all ties with a blunt, brittle knife I don't need a map for the circle of life It's what you don't say and what you don't do That's made me detest and despise every you The hands and the eyes that you own are like ice It's come back around now you're paying the price 15th June 2011

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Date: 6/18/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congrats Jodie on your big win in the contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:22:00 AM
i loved it good job.. cory
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:56:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Jodie. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 3:21:00 AM
really cool write jodie *luv skat
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