Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Shape

Finally Found My Pie

Birth
                                                   To Puberty;
                                           A sudden crave for Pie
                                      Couldn't tell you what kind of Pie
                            My conscious only told me to search for this Pie
                        From young adult to adult, yet, I haven't found this Pie
             I've traveled the distance going to several restaurants, and yet, no Pie
         I stumbled across a stranger, and somehow we started talking about this Pie
        He stated, "whatever your needs, wants, or desires, just pray, even if its Pie
             Shaking my head in disbelief, I walked away, still thinking about this Pie
               Starving; at home willing to do something different about this Pie
                 I kneeled down beside my bed; my eyes were closed to this Pie
                   Thinking back to the conversation I had in regards to this Pie
                    Finally mustering up words, I prayed and asked for this Pie
                      I received a voice saying, " You have now found the PIE,

                               

                                             Now, my son, eat of this Pie
                                                          For I'AM
                                                        YOUR ONLY
                                                             PIE."
         
 Pace, G
04-19-2012

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Mahtab Bangalee June 26, 2021 at 11:30 PM the pie is the life where the earth is active naturally~

Robin Davis June 5, 2014 at 10:59 PM Pace This is so inspiring and uniquely written. A very powerful and deep message for the reader to feel. Thank you for the nice comment on my 100th poem write.

Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2012 at 8:31 PM thank you for the comment on my blog... means much... xox~pd Pace Ink-U-Script August 19, 2012 at 6:54 AM No thank you PD!!

Doreen Wright July 1, 2012 at 2:29 PM DEEP and POWERFUL! No need to look, He is always there!! I enjoyed this surprise ending and agree... Pace Ink-U-Script August 19, 2012 at 6:53 AM Thanks Doreen!!! Hugs!!!

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM This poem is awesome.... God, forever is my grace... luv~PD Pace Ink-U-Script August 19, 2012 at 6:53 AM Yes indeed maam!!! Thanks PD

Terry L. Allen June 17, 2012 at 11:01 AM I love your originality here. I totally love it when poets find a different way to say and present things to their readers as it takes away the repetition. One fact said one way reaches few. The same fact said different ways reaches many in different ways and may even find a way to reach you. Huggs TLee Pace Ink-U-Script June 17, 2012 at 10:14 PM I totally agree..and i love your comment..thank you for sharing with me..always!!

Bertha Davis June 7, 2012 at 11:34 AM Wow!!!!I am loving your analogy in this piece. Thought provoking and inspirational. Love the depth Pace Ink-U-Script June 7, 2012 at 4:00 PM Thank you beautiful!!! Muah..hugs

Carma Sanderson May 31, 2012 at 3:35 AM "loving you more n' more, can't get enough of your caragious soul... This is astounding. work Carma' I tried doing a shape but don't think i did it right.... Pace Ink-U-Script May 31, 2012 at 8:34 AM Thank you dearly Carma..soo beautiful!!

Peggy Caulfield May 2, 2012 at 5:23 PM I really like the picture of the pie and the True Pie is the only pie. keep thriving on this Pie and you will never need another pie. Thanks also for your endearing comments on my Spiritual Thought poem. - Peggy Pace Ink-U-Script May 2, 2012 at 5:52 PM Lol...thank you so much for the motivation.

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2012 at 12:50 PM Enjoyed this evangelical work ..Good job..Looks like a great merginue light and fluffy..Sara Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 9:33 AM Thank you maam for stopping by and sharing with me...hugs

Dan Kearley April 25, 2012 at 9:45 PM Nice write! Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 2:27 AM Thank you sir!

Black Eyed Susan April 25, 2012 at 9:23 AM good analogy :) Pace Ink-U-Script April 26, 2012 at 2:26 AM Thank you maam!!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity April 19, 2012 at 11:54 PM lol... Nice one G Pace...smiles... chiquita Pace Ink-U-Script April 20, 2012 at 2:09 AM Thank you sweetheart!!! Smiles

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 1:37 PM The sun is shining bright here this afternoon in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us G. Love, Carol Pace Ink-U-Script April 19, 2012 at 2:30 PM All smiles!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts Carol...always and always a pleasure!!!