Finally

Fun. Having fun,
and playing, just
freedom, freedom.
Youth, children and,
completely free.

Time moving fast.
Forcing: pushing.
Falling not 
able to stop.
Dying, slowly
inside: dying.

Pain; the sharpness,
Tearing, ripping.
Welcoming the
Pain. Crimson
Staining my clothes
Running down my 
Skin. And more, more
Pressure… harder.

Dizzy, dizzy
really dizzy.
But still pressing
harder and deeper. 
Blood flowing fast. 
And the pain; the
unbearable
torture it’s nice.

Slipping deeper,
into the dark.
The beautiful
abyss that is
death. Finally.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bell Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 8:38 AM
pretty good keep them coming
Ougo Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 7:57 AM
beautiful Write Katy..i love it :-)
Lubasi Wina  Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Ah great,but what opted you to write this piece?
Frustrations Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 7:04 AM
A girl committed suicide in our school. I was merely wondering what it would be like.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Yes, the title is perfect and it is a good poem! - Katy, today is yours .... enjoy it ....... have a nice time! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Flach Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 6:01 PM
If it were me, I would simply use the last word of this poem as the title: "Finally".
Frustrations Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Oh my gosh, yes that's amazing. Can I use it?
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