Finally

Dilly dallying fumbling about, pitter patter falls the rain outside. Jovial, my nerves, worn... long patches run up-and down the carpet floor. Whack tap, lightening crashes, I cringe hold-my-breath, my new baby cousin... cries, my-heart... it soars! Author notes http://allpoetry.com/ban/show/6960 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4OXrmxDp44
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December 10, 2010 at 8:29 PM
I invite you to read: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=6883 as well investigate as to why I ask you of this, "please":. I am so honored you have stopped by friend you have blessed me-yes - I wish as well to bless you. ~ Love ~ James ~ (or if you will) ~ e v e r y o n e 1 ~
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December 9, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Sweet and lovely write James.. very visual and vivid lines .. well done ..with luv..
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