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Poetic Form: Monoku

Inspired: 2023 November 19

Image: Dust Wind Giphy by Storyful.com

New York Weather GIF by Storyful

thousands I love you's o'er one's lifetime ~~ it's not the same as the last time

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Date: 11/20/2023 1:34:00 PM

Interesting picture you shared with us and I like your thoughts penned in this Monoku. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/20/2023 2:21:00 PM

That image was in a compilation of 'Dust Devils', which I thought it'll be best for the monoku. Thanks and you're welcomed, Sara. Aloha, William

Date: 11/20/2023 12:31:00 PM

I enjoyed your creative write/fun picture. Have a great/fun day............

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/20/2023 12:42:00 PM

I appreciate you, Paula, for your sharing visit, my friend. Aloha, William