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Finale' ... "dancing With the Leaves"

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               Vintage russet leaf

                    pirouettes one final dance

                         Farewell performance

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Phil Boy

April 27, 2010 at 9:14 AM

Perfect ,baby boy

James Marshall Goff

April 24, 2010 at 3:40 PM

natural elegance, Carrie! congrats! jimbo

John Freeman

April 23, 2010 at 5:54 PM

A fine poem presentation Carrie for your win. Congratulations. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2010 at 12:53 PM

Lovely just lovely perfect internal form for haiku topic/setting/action/you effectively juxtapose two imagesin line 3 nature & the dance..boy are you a quick study lol Light & Love winner gal!

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2010 at 6:22 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2010 at 6:15 AM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. nice intriguing words for the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jeralynn Clark

April 23, 2010 at 6:05 AM

Great Haiku Carrie........poetic vision Congratulations!!! Love Jeralynn

Gert W. Knop

April 23, 2010 at 4:11 AM

Lovely written Haiku, Carrie! Really enjoyed reading this on my birthday. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your friendly comments...Have a nice weekend...Gert