Finale

Finale
Streams of tears falling;
His crepuscular brawn years,
Embracing his end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 24, 2010 at 2:50 PM
May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry this beautiful Sunday afternoon and thank you for sharing it Narie. Love, Carol
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October 23, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Very effective visual write Marie.. a powerful Senryu.. saying much..luv.. happy weekend..
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