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people run. through their city. their village. their house. their flat. they run. read advisors to get for what they needed more time to get it. they do not take this time, no. they keep on running. seeing senseless series on TV seeing new scientific realizations. believing them. panicking and keep on running. where did we land? our world is a tangle of roads and we creep along narrow pathes and crossroads and try to find the right way. scientificly seen life is impossible. we are impossible and actually we humans are impossible for our planet. who says that we have to see everything in a scientific way? who says that we need advisors or TV or do we? i can look into a pond or a window or a raindrop and see and realize that this is me. i can look as well into the water of a toilet bowl and see and realize that this is me. why don’t we pause a bit and watch ourselves for a moment in that bowl? why don’t we pause a bit after boinking, laying down. seeing each other. feeling. are we uptight? where are those fears coming from? it doesn’t matter how those hormones work. the feeling is important that is slapping me in the face without a warning. that changes my shape into a complete handicap grinning for days. LOVE creates goosebumps when I touch your skin. love creates sensitivity within. and over all love protects us without any science: from the senselessness of life. by Lotte

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Date: 6/18/2017 10:01:00 PM
Good write for your first & being featured as well. Welcome to poetrysoup :)
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Date: 4/26/2015 3:00:00 PM
Lotte, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Lotte Lo
Date: 4/27/2015 5:39:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! I'm humble to have this featuring as a newby :) Read you soon ;) Lotte
Date: 4/9/2015 5:18:00 AM
This is such an awesome write and the end summarizes it well. My fav " i can look into a pond or a window or a raindrop and see and realize that this is me. i can look as well into the water of a toilet bowl and see and realize that this is me.". #7
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Date: 4/9/2015 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for your nice words! <3 Keep your favorite lines in mind when you go for a walk the next time and there is a mirror apearing :)
Date: 4/7/2015 6:55:00 AM
- Dear Lotte, many deep thoughts and questions - A really well written poem! - I welcome you to the P Soup! - Looking forward to reading more from you in the future - (I'd posted this as a free verse :) - I wish you a lovely day - One greeting from Norway and Anne-Lise :)
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Lotte Lo
Date: 4/8/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment, dear Anne- Lise. Lovely day for you too. A big smile from Germany :)

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