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Final Moments

The whiskey keeps taking me The whiskey keeps breaking me For all…my natural born life I’m broken and hell bound I don’t need a friend now But you…are there by my side The ways are all wrong now And home is so far now Just take…me to the blues Now I do not know why But when I sit and cry You…are always in my thoughts It tears me all down Emotions go all around But I…don’t move an inch With the whiskey in my head I feel so near death That I…don’t care anymore You’re nowhere near Now goes my final tear Take…me to that lake of fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/20/2011 5:42:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Cameron. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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