Final Moments

ride the unexpected

                          go with the fllow


                                                stay a bit longer


tell a friend or two


                          imagination will take over


                                                
                                                d-day is near



sympathise with thy neighbor


                          
                           wink to a stranger


                                                the day is nearly over



do you have a bucket list?
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Shango Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 2:07 PM
This is a rich find for me ... I love war poetry ... but something more is here, a new creation, a better cannon being born. Thank you, brandy
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May 13, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Another awesome poem! Keep writting let your heart spill its emotions onto your paper! - jeremiah
Goff Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 4:35 PM
geez Brandy, I hope this isn't biographical...lovely write! Jim
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