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Final Moments

ride the unexpected go with the fllow stay a bit longer tell a friend or two imagination will take over d-day is near sympathise with thy neighbor wink to a stranger the day is nearly over do you have a bucket list?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/20/2009 2:07:00 PM
This is a rich find for me ... I love war poetry ... but something more is here, a new creation, a better cannon being born. Thank you, brandy
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Date: 5/13/2009 11:40:00 AM
Another awesome poem! Keep writting let your heart spill its emotions onto your paper! - jeremiah
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:35:00 PM
geez Brandy, I hope this isn't biographical...lovely write! Jim
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