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Final kiss

final kiss on a wrinkled face of dying rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/23/2018 11:34:00 AM
I simply can say"great words "Vivien the beauty of a speech is to be precise and not lenghty. you have done this remarkably
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Date: 6/14/2017 4:11:00 PM
Honestly, I don't read a lot of haikus because most of them don't make sense to me but this one does, Vivien. Nice job:)
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Vivien Wade
Date: 6/14/2017 6:06:00 PM
I'm with you. Many don't make sense. I think some try to be too clever and don't keep them simple. But it is like a lot of poems, to many big words that needs a dictionary. I like Robert Frost.
Date: 6/14/2017 12:33:00 AM
Very deep and emotive Vivien... Well Done!
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Vivien Wade
Date: 6/14/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thanks again. Haiku is not my favourite, as many don't make sense to me. I like the ones simple to understand.
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Joseph Soper
Date: 6/14/2017 2:07:00 AM
Welcome to the club.. LOL.. I am aspiring to be novice, think I'm still stuck in juvenile...
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Vivien Wade
Date: 6/14/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thanks for comment. Lovely to receive them. Encouraging.. I am a novice at haiku but am learning to like some.