Final Kiss

final kiss
on a wrinkled face
of dying rose

goodbyehaiku

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Muhammad Imtiaz

February 23, 2018 at 11:34 AM

I simply can say"great words "Vivien the beauty of a speech is to be precise and not lenghty. you have done this remarkably

Daniel Turner

June 14, 2017 at 4:11 PM

Honestly, I don't read a lot of haikus because most of them don't make sense to me but this one does, Vivien. Nice job:)

Vivien Wade

June 14, 2017 at 6:06 PM

I'm with you. Many don't make sense. I think some try to be too clever and don't keep them simple. But it is like a lot of poems, to many big words that needs a dictionary. I like Robert Frost.