Final Exit

Empty head, gun full of lead, goodbye forever to my despairs
Broken heart, it’s sad to part, but it’s clear that nobody cares

Please forgive me for my life has been unkind
Now I’m sure, it’s time to leave it all behind

I've got this twitch, makes my life a ***** and it wont go away
I'm getting old, my skin feels cold and my hair is turning grey
Love is overrated, the life that we are fated, is one in which i don't desire to stay

Setting sun, this time has come; you couldn’t stop me if you tried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sainz Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:27 AM
wow deep indeed, but please know the Lord is a loving, caring, and all the the above of great things, go to him in prayer turn from your flesh and you will be blessed, peace to you, daniel sainz
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Nice interesting thoughts on final exist, Jamie
Ruebel Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Hello Jamie, I can share with you that we have all felt this way at one point or another. Then, something wonderful comes along and we get back up on our feet again. I look forward to reading more of your work. As Always, Shar
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