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The perfect spot for viewing birds, outside my parents' window. 2020 has been a year of seeing more clearly, even to the pinpoint of eyes just above masks.

Final Day of Spring 2020

FINAL DAY OF SPRING 2020

a morning visit —
the red cardinal inside
its outside upside-down world

6/19/2020

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2020

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June 21, 2020 at 3:58 PM

Great imagery Kim..

June 22, 2020 at 5:11 AM

Thank you, Silent! I pondered that bird for a while. I was helping with my dad, who had a triple bypass a week ago.

June 19, 2020 at 4:15 PM

Yes, it's an "upside down world". I feel sorry for the birds...nice one, Kim.

June 19, 2020 at 5:51 PM

Thank you, Carole! xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2020 at 1:33 PM

what a cool little Ku for the end of spring!

June 19, 2020 at 5:51 PM

Thank you, Andrea! xx

June 19, 2020 at 5:51 PM

Thank you, Andrea! xx

June 19, 2020 at 12:54 PM

Nice imagery in your Senryu...

June 19, 2020 at 12:54 PM

Thank you, Arturo!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 19, 2020 at 8:49 AM

I have been communing with the birds a little extra this year. Their world a little more right with our own upside down. Enjoyed this. Mo hugs! xomo

June 19, 2020 at 12:13 PM

Thank you, Mo! xo

June 19, 2020 at 8:29 AM

It's certainly given us all time to reflect on life, our world has turned upside down and inside out lol. Tom

June 19, 2020 at 8:42 AM

For sure. Thanks, my friend.

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