Richard Lamoureux Poet Tail-rhyme

Final Contribution

A carcass lies upon the ground
On close inspection life is found

From death to life new cells conform

A single lost life, provides a feast
To feed the stong and very least

Nature is nourished no reason to mourn



Thought I was writing a Terzanelle on hope and ended up with a Tail Rhyme instead. 
Being it is my only tail Rhyme I guess it is my favorite.

Favorite Tail Rhyme Contest

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Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 8:43 PM You are so right, there are so many of natures little recyclers that feast on the dead. Thumbs-up on this one :) Richard Lamoureux August 6, 2014 at 7:57 AM Thanks Casarah. Also thanks for visiting my first Terzanelle.

Sara Kendrick December 7, 2012 at 1:47 PM Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading it once again..Sara Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2012 at 6:24 PM thanks Sara.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Richard. Love Carol Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2012 at 6:25 PM thanks so much Carol

Yanny Widjanarko December 4, 2012 at 5:11 PM Richard congrats on your big win :D Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 5:54 PM Thanks sweet Yanny!

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 4:59 PM Richard., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 5:53 PM Thanks Linda. Soup mail.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:33 PM , Congratulations Blondy xx Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 1:37 PM Being I'm Blondy does that make me the Golden Boy???

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:27 AM congrats Richard on an excellent premise for tail-rhyme poetry .. something different and unique .. I see u enjoy my best friend, Constance Dear Heart and her beautiful amazing poetry ..she is truly as sweet as her name and a wonderful friend too .. Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 1:38 PM What a sweet endorsement. I am sure she appreciates you as well. I have met a lot of nice people through the site so far.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 4, 2012 at 8:59 AM Congrats on your win with this deep rhyme!! Jag Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 9:02 AM Thanks

Joseph May December 4, 2012 at 8:46 AM congrats on your win Richard Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 8:48 AM Thanks Joseph Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM Thanks Kash, I now have leaned the third and sixth line should have been shorter.

Kash Poet December 4, 2012 at 7:40 AM Very nice Tail rhyme here Richard!Congrats on the win.

Matthew Anish November 15, 2012 at 10:38 AM Fine description of a natural process here. "Life lives at the expense of other life". Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Richard Lamoureux November 15, 2012 at 10:49 AM Thanks Matthew, I appreciate you stopping by to read.

Audrey Haick November 14, 2012 at 7:45 PM Profound write, Richard. This re-confirms my belief that the world is "One"...everything that's been given life is.. I know that some people do not agree and that's fine...it's only my opinion. Thanks for the visit. Enjoyed reading your poem. Always, Annalise Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2012 at 10:07 PM Thanks so much Annalise, I do agree even though it can be very sad.

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2012 at 3:53 PM Enjoyed reading your nature work..Sad that is the way it is in the world of nature...Sara Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2012 at 3:57 PM I am thankful that the Nature Poetess has come to visit. I am in awe of how you capture nature. For me this is but a first awkward step.