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Final Contribution

A carcass lies upon the ground
On close inspection life is found

From death to life new cells conform

A single lost life, provides a feast
To feed the stong and very least

Nature is nourished no reason to mourn



Thought I was writing a Terzanelle on hope and ended up with a Tail Rhyme instead. 
Being it is my only tail Rhyme I guess it is my favorite.

Favorite Tail Rhyme Contest

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Casarah Nance Date: 8/5/2014 8:43:00 PM You are so right, there are so many of natures little recyclers that feast on the dead. Thumbs-up on this one :) Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/6/2014 7:57:00 AM Thanks Casarah. Also thanks for visiting my first Terzanelle.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/7/2012 1:47:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading it once again..Sara Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:24:00 PM thanks Sara.

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/7/2012 11:01:00 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Richard. Love Carol Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:25:00 PM thanks so much Carol

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/4/2012 5:11:00 PM Richard congrats on your big win :D Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 5:54:00 PM Thanks sweet Yanny!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/4/2012 4:59:00 PM Richard., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 5:53:00 PM Thanks Linda. Soup mail.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/4/2012 1:33:00 PM , Congratulations Blondy xx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 1:37:00 PM Being I'm Blondy does that make me the Golden Boy???

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/4/2012 9:27:00 AM congrats Richard on an excellent premise for tail-rhyme poetry .. something different and unique .. I see u enjoy my best friend, Constance Dear Heart and her beautiful amazing poetry ..she is truly as sweet as her name and a wonderful friend too .. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 1:38:00 PM What a sweet endorsement. I am sure she appreciates you as well. I have met a lot of nice people through the site so far.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 12/4/2012 8:59:00 AM Congrats on your win with this deep rhyme!! Jag Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 9:02:00 AM Thanks

Joseph May Date: 12/4/2012 8:46:00 AM congrats on your win Richard Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 8:48:00 AM Thanks Joseph Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 8:47:00 AM Thanks Kash, I now have leaned the third and sixth line should have been shorter.

Kash Poet Date: 12/4/2012 7:40:00 AM Very nice Tail rhyme here Richard!Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/15/2012 10:38:00 AM Fine description of a natural process here. "Life lives at the expense of other life". Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 10:49:00 AM Thanks Matthew, I appreciate you stopping by to read.

Audrey Haick Date: 11/14/2012 7:45:00 PM Profound write, Richard. This re-confirms my belief that the world is "One"...everything that's been given life is.. I know that some people do not agree and that's fine...it's only my opinion. Thanks for the visit. Enjoyed reading your poem. Always, Annalise Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2012 10:07:00 PM Thanks so much Annalise, I do agree even though it can be very sad.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/14/2012 3:53:00 PM Enjoyed reading your nature work..Sad that is the way it is in the world of nature...Sara Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/14/2012 3:57:00 PM I am thankful that the Nature Poetess has come to visit. I am in awe of how you capture nature. For me this is but a first awkward step.