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Final Breath

never followed a course my life could have been worse received sarcastic jabs and rode plenty of cabs called many names and played some games when all is said and done and my life's almost gone judge my actions no distractions my heart was always pure though my faith wasn't sure evil and good my neighborhood What's waiting after death? I won't fear final breath

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Date: 8/16/2015 7:13:00 PM
so good - i love succinct and related very much to your message. thank you ... CayCay
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 8/17/2015 3:58:00 PM
You're welcome CayCay, and thanks for giving it a read!
Date: 8/15/2015 7:36:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. thank you.
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