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Final Break-Up

Colossal retreat 
Feelings that I’ve harbored true
Retracting my love

Russell Sivey

lifelost lovehaiku

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Don Johnson

September 9, 2011 at 6:45 PM

into shells we slip n slide, place where pain we can abide, sometimes....on ya cobber...

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2011 at 10:16 PM

I enjoyed this one, Russell.

Elizabeth Wesley

September 4, 2011 at 9:09 PM

Been there, that gives us the fuel to write. So much feeling in this to identify with Russ thanks for your visit and sweet comment on Tempatation.

Jack Horne

September 4, 2011 at 4:05 PM

I think we've all been there, my friend - well expressed

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 4, 2011 at 3:38 PM

well so true Russell in these mesmerizing lines of Haiku.. wounded hearts react exactly so..emotional one luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

September 4, 2011 at 2:51 PM

It is so difficult to retract that love, Russell, especially when you felt it would last forever. Indeed, it is a "colossal retreat" and some of us never completely lose the feelings we once had for aa loved one. Beautiful haiku, dear. If this is for Michael's contest, I wish you success. Love and blessings, Carolyn