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Final Blow By Anna Lo P

..To miss, not to miss ..A Love, not in bliss Tight hug, Sweet kiss This one, I'll miss.. ..Heart is in abyss Mind is in freeze Body badly decrease Soul not in peace.. ..Time again ticks Like eyes that blinks Breath sounds like a hiss Must be done with this.. ..It'll be the last piece Make it short, don't tease Lonely hug, Sad kiss, My final blow to this... ..Don't do this, I say please.. Final line is Just like this ...................................+ P.S.. I forgot, I have 9 lives, am saved by this! YES!!!

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Kim Andreasen

Date: 10/24/2012 8:23:00 PM

clever! 1st one read and can't wait to read more.

Anna Lo
Date: 10/24/2012 11:16:00 PM

Hello Ms. Kimberly..Really? you find it clever?? well, then you must be a clever one!! :) :D...my works are just regular stuffs as compared to yours & the rest of the writers here in PS..but I'm grateful that you'd enjoyed reading it..Thanks again..and I'll do the same to support your works too!..Anna

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2012 1:20:00 PM

Anna, take care of ALL your 9 lives. - Very well written!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Anna Lo
Date: 10/20/2012 10:19:00 AM

Hi Ms. Anna, my many thanks to you again for not failing to read my works.. yours are a lot greater than mine, absolutely!! thanks for the wishes & have a nice weekend to you too! :) - Anna Lo xoxo

David Williams

Date: 10/18/2012 1:28:00 PM

Anna this is like a boxing match, ducking and diving fast moving, excellent, I like it..David

Anna Lo
Date: 10/19/2012 1:16:00 AM

..that's the last piece I have done since then.. mind totally blown away..can't think of any poems to make..until then, wait for the next rematch, just like in boxing.:D Anna

Anna Lo
Date: 10/19/2012 1:12:00 AM

Hi David, thanks as always..for I never fail to amuse you with works..:D..Anyways, I thought that others might find the title a bit obscene/vulgar (greenminded), you know!?! :).. At that moment, I felt like my mind's gonna Blow, catching my breath, & running out of time...'Tic-Tac-Tac..say it & make it quick'.. so the words I used aren't that much either...