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Final Blow By Anna Lo P

..To miss, not to miss
..A Love, not in bliss
  Tight hug, Sweet kiss 
  This one, I'll miss..

..Heart is in abyss
  Mind is in freeze 
  Body badly decrease
  Soul not in peace..  

..Time again ticks
   Like eyes that blinks
   Breath sounds like a hiss
   Must be done with this..

..It'll be the last piece
   Make it short, don't tease
   Lonely hug, Sad kiss, 
   My final blow to this...

..Don't do this,
  I say please..
  Final line is
  Just like this ...................................+
 
P.S.. I forgot, I have 9 lives, am saved by this! YES!!!

Copyright © Anna Lo | Year Posted 2012

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Kim Andreasen Date: 10/24/2012 8:23:00 PM clever! 1st one read and can't wait to read more. Login to Reply Anna Lo Date: 10/24/2012 11:16:00 PM Hello Ms. Kimberly..Really? you find it clever?? well, then you must be a clever one!! :) :D...my works are just regular stuffs as compared to yours & the rest of the writers here in PS..but I'm grateful that you'd enjoyed reading it..Thanks again..and I'll do the same to support your works too!..Anna

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2012 1:20:00 PM Anna, take care of ALL your 9 lives. - Very well written!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anna Lo Date: 10/20/2012 10:19:00 AM Hi Ms. Anna, my many thanks to you again for not failing to read my works.. yours are a lot greater than mine, absolutely!! thanks for the wishes & have a nice weekend to you too! :) - Anna Lo xoxo

David Williams Date: 10/18/2012 1:28:00 PM Anna this is like a boxing match, ducking and diving fast moving, excellent, I like it..David Login to Reply Anna Lo Date: 10/19/2012 1:16:00 AM ..that's the last piece I have done since then.. mind totally blown away..can't think of any poems to make..until then, wait for the next rematch, just like in boxing.:D Anna Anna Lo Date: 10/19/2012 1:12:00 AM Hi David, thanks as always..for I never fail to amuse you with works..:D..Anyways, I thought that others might find the title a bit obscene/vulgar (greenminded), you know!?! :).. At that moment, I felt like my mind's gonna Blow, catching my breath, & running out of time...'Tic-Tac-Tac..say it & make it quick'.. so the words I used aren't that much either...