Richard Evans Poet Triolet

Final Beginnings

death did not enter the room
death built the room I was in

a saga worth being exhumed
death did not enter the room

seeds of guile indeed did bloom
slow, malignant, and close to sin

death did not enter the room
death built the room I was in

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Phyl losophy September 17, 2018 at 12:10 PM Richard, sincere condolences to you and your family... The title you chose for this piece really grabbed my attention... As I was able to relate... Wishing you all the best! Phyl Richard Evans September 22, 2018 at 2:31 AM Thanks Phyl. A title is vital. All the best...………...peace!

Susan Ashley August 30, 2018 at 10:31 PM Richard, deep sad emotions simmer in the poignancy of poetic lines that are rich in captivating emotional imagery and flows smoothly from an intriguing title. A superb soulful piece.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Susan Ashley September 1, 2018 at 8:22 PM Richard, I'm so sorry for your loss.. please accept my condolences, my dear friend.. Richard Evans August 31, 2018 at 8:58 PM Thanks Susan. The passing of a loved one triggered this poem. It was written with a tear in the eye.