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Final Assumption

What is your final destination? I'm pretty sure you don't even know Why is there a need to correct people in your assumption? Is it because you can no more walk your assumed role? They who can no longer complete their story Why do they expect you to... Not only to reason but to reprimand in theory Did I not listen to the wiser fools? It takes an age to command in a way But causes we know doesn't mean we know a 'now' It takes ages to stubbornly stay A tide to a wave, a smile to the grave cannot unbound My life is over when I think about love But my achievements in wisdom brings my words Are we all worthy enough to be worth? Are we worthy enough for our words to one day be heard? I'm absolutely sure I'm never to know That faithful day whence claim my final destination To have walked the path to numerous assumed roles Will I one day understand my esteem assumption?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 1:08:00 AM
Hey Joel! I really like the flow that you've got in this poem. It reads very smoothly. You've got a good sense of word sounds in this to help progress the poem along as you write.
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Joel Lee
Date: 4/4/2016 1:13:00 AM
And I can't thank you enough... it always is great to know that a fellow poet enjoy reading as much as I enjoyed writing this piece :D

Book: Shattered Sighs