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Film Noire

Drip, drip, dripping down The moon it shimmers In the blood that ripples On the ground Pink water In the sink A cockroach On the wall Sip, sip, sipping up The whiskey from an Old tin cup; one last Gulp devours all Now lay Back and Go to Sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2010 6:24:00 PM
A lovely... rhyme? verse? hahaha, I'm not sure about the category but I like :D
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Date: 7/14/2010 9:36:00 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours David and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2010 3:11:00 AM
This is not a pretty scene that you have portrayed...Sorta like a diminished hexaverse ...Don't know if the count is correct..Don't think it is...Little changes would fix that...Sara
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:56:00 PM
Indeed, a film noire,David! Wish you better days soon. Thanks for your comments on mine.
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