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So what are you called? they call me Jude. ................................................................... That's a strange name, in fact it's quite rude. Do you come here often? I haven't seen you around. ................................................................... I never peeked there, I just looked at the ground. So would you like anything? perhaps something to drink? .................................................................. Doing that with the glass would be quite painful I think. I can see that you're angry, do you want me to go? .................................................................. My mother's not like that, i would like you to know. Well goodnight then I guess, I'll go lubricate my throat. ................................................................. Really? are you sure? wait! I'll go grab my coat.

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Date: 7/14/2009 4:01:00 AM
hi Sara, this is actually a conversation between a man and a woman with the females lines being blanked out, so all you get are his questions and his reaction, the reader fills in her response.
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Date: 7/14/2009 3:35:00 AM
I like your lines here. Two people who are one totally different levels...right. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2009 7:22:00 AM
Wonderful rhymes, Interesting rhymes...You are such a promising poet. Please Keep writing... Share your thought with us. Great you Pawlu! Adeleke
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