Pawlu Pascarawlu Poet Rhyme

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So what are you called? they call me Jude.
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That's a strange name, in fact it's quite rude.


Do you come here often? I haven't seen you around.
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I never peeked there, I just looked at the ground.


So would you like anything? perhaps something to drink?
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Doing that with the glass would be quite painful I think.


I can see that you're angry, do you want me to go?
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My mother's not like that, i would like you to know.


Well goodnight then I guess, I'll go lubricate my throat.
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Really? are you sure? wait! I'll go grab my coat.

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Pawlu Pascarawlu July 14, 2009 at 4:01 AM hi Sara, this is actually a conversation between a man and a woman with the females lines being blanked out, so all you get are his questions and his reaction, the reader fills in her response.

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2009 at 3:35 AM I like your lines here. Two people who are one totally different levels...right. Sara

Adeleke Adeite July 12, 2009 at 7:22 AM Wonderful rhymes, Interesting rhymes...You are such a promising poet. Please Keep writing... Share your thought with us. Great you Pawlu! Adeleke