Fill In the Blank

miss take or given
           no is the quietest word

         her (your choice) says yes

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2020 4:08:00 PM

Hope she didn't 'miss' out here! ~ Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/28/2020 10:06:00 AM

Listen missy... ;p

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/24/2020 10:05:00 PM

Maureen, Well it has to be her pinkie toe. It says 'yes' even to furniture. Would make a great armoire. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/24/2020 10:29:00 PM

That little piggy should have stayed home ;), xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 1/24/2020 5:02:00 PM

Interactive poetry at its best Maureen. Really getting the reader involved. "Miss take" and "mistake" wonderful word usage. I have to say that I didn't draw a blank. I'm trying to grasp the totality of the meaning of this poem Maureen. The 1st two lines I take as a woman saying no means no. This I agree with, but the "fill in the blank" line, to me it seems that the woman will say yes if it's a word with what she agrees. OR HAVE I missed the point? HELP ME MAUREEN!!!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/26/2020 6:23:00 AM

Oh my lol.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/25/2020 5:53:00 PM

Queef eh, LOL ;D,

Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/25/2020 5:08:00 PM

Well with my scenario I thought she was saying no but then allowing the man to think to fill in the blank as a yes from her part; so the first word that popped into my head was "queef"; meaning she wanted to partake.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/24/2020 9:07:00 PM

Thank you Jeff! A wee bit off point, I can't say it much better than Nina did below. Vulnerability. Think "she was asking for it (her skirt was short)". xomo