Figures (Fibonacci No. 1)

rain
falls
much like
similes
only when I am
reduced into synecdoches.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ilagan Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:15 AM
Thank you all for the kind words! I truly appreciate them.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Arch, Congratulatins on your placement in Brian's contest. Lovingly, Dane
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June 2, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Arch, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Mason Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Have to look up your last word, Arch. WOW ... okay for a first fibonacci (?) this is really awesome ... congratulations on your win in Brian's contest and I look forward to reading more of your writing. Welcome to PoetrySoup!!
Winter Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Excellent work here...Congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest!! Well done!!
Strand Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Arch.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Indelible Impressions is now open
Guzzi Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 4:49 PM
thanks for the new word! synecdoches.! Light & Love
Strand Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Arch.Rgds Brian
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May 30, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Nice use of this challenging form for an interesting view. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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