Figured Out

Contest for Richard Lamoureux

What does this man mean to me?
A face in the world I will never see.

We are probably alike,
we might even hit it off.
He's got eclectic taste and no condescending scoff.
No judgement in his eyes 
but wonder in his soul
looking for poetic alms donated in his bowl.

Is he passionate, free of sin?
what percolates in his mind within?
I don't think a thousand poems could give you a glimpse
of the depth of thought this stranger thinks.
 
You are not a person who easily fatigues,
and for many who meet you
posses great intrigue.
Maybe you don't recognize as much in yourself
and that's why you ask everyone else.

You command language,
have a strategist mind, 
observe how pieces fit together,
you can be humorous and kind.

You know who you are, 
but maybe there is a doubt
and that's why, try as we may,
will anyone truly figure you out?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Congrats, Krystal! Loved the poem and the final stanza!
Cochrane Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Kim, that is very kind of you!
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations Krystal on your win!!
Cochrane Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Sarita!
Kimathi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:51 AM
Congrats Krystal, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Cochrane Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Thank you, I appreciate your kind words!
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 3:34 PM
This is so good! Congratulations!
Cochrane Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Thanks so much for entering this piece in my contest. I very much enjoyed it. Congrats on your high placement.
Cochrane Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Richard and Darren. It was a fun contest, I enjoyed reading your poetry and writing mine in response.
White Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your 3d place :)
Green Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:51 PM
He sounds like a complex guy to me. Your poem on the other hand is wonderfully written, I like the turn about at the end. Who are any of us really, avatars that write poetic thoughts that maybe, just maybe will give a hint. Fantastic Krystal.
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