Figure Skater

He glides 
his skates swishing 
in a flurry of ice, 
caressing with slow movements; mere 
foreplay. 

Silence 
compels the crowd 
disguises excitement
Great expectations fill the air.
All watch. 

He stops 
at center ring. 
Ice gladiator all set 
to make a kill gently, with grace. 
Grandly. 

Then flips. 
Perfect landing! 
He hears the crowd’s applause~ 
incense daring him show his skills. 
Dazzling.

Teasing 
with his body ~ 
a hypnotic magnet 
becoming a blur of colors. 
Blending. 

Music 
goes mad as he
circles with dizzy speed~ 
a human whirling, spinning top. 
Gidddy. 

Floating 
as in a dream 
one cannot get out of. 
Now he’s a leaf falling in slow 
motion. 

Still more 
he builds into 
a climactic finish~ 
a tornado that goes in a 
frenzy. 

He drops,
slips on his foot;
loses balance and dives 
his nose flat on the cold ice. All 
are stunned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Well done for your descriptive poem, Josefina.
Costales Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thanks for droppng by Julia
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