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Figment Inside

Wandering around the earth saying you love me? What do you know of love..,
If I thought you knew anything of love I would've stayed..
yes, there beside you in that little house, in that little bed.  
Not just locked away inside that thick head.

(I can't tell her she is only a figment)

Well., easy enough to talk to a shadow, you cast one too. Change the radio station to your oldies, but don't see me, don't even listen. 
Remember that day you walked me to my Psych 101 class?
You didn't even try, you didn't reach for my hand, and now I don't care.   

(I can't tell her she is only a figment)

There are codes in all of life, I built mine around them. To get past my past, trying to tell you it. I was in mortal combat with depression. You never knew how dark those days could get. Always smiling; handing me a crummy flower. You never had any codes, no morals, only music. Yet you dare to think you love me. 

(I can't bear to tell her she is only a figment)

If I thought you knew anything of love I would've stayed.
Yes, there beside you in that little house, in that little bed.  
Not just locked away inside that thick head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 11:10 AM
thanks for your reply to my comment I am seeing just now. So she WAS real!!! I've known guys that made me feel that way too.
Theraven Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 10:40 PM
Andrea, Yes she was, and still is. A valentine in music.., it was all I had to give. -Richard
Ligon Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Sounds like a personal poem. You captured the emotions well.
Theraven Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 8:46 PM
Juliet, Thank you for the comment. Yes, I knew someone once, who lived in a bubble. Too dearly. -Richard
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Haunted comes to mind, some love sticks around. Viscera remembers, colonized with butterflies. My feels from this piece. xomo
Theraven Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Maureen, Loved your comment 'some love sticks around..' Both attuned in atonement, we. -Richard
Trifiatis Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Richard, my dearest friend, Happy New Year! I loved your poem and my comment is not ...a figment! Stay safe my friend!
Theraven Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Demetrios, Thank you for that comment. Such an odd word it is too. fig-ment /'figmnt/ noun a thing that someone believes to be real but that exists only in their imagination. Continued success and good health I wish for you friend. -Richard
Buehler Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:09 PM
This is an intriguingly romantic tale of a figment-sort of like being haunted by a dream. Excellent work! Evelyn
Theraven Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Evelyn, Thank you for that, it's exactly like being haunted ny a dream. Except the dream still hasn't died (though figuratively it has). The object of the dream remains. -Richard
Rose  Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:47 PM
I tried to listen to the poem but all I heard was music on my end did I miss something ?
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 4:27 PM
PS meant for the recorded voice and the title suggests you listen to the poem. But I would rather hear fingernails on a chalkboard than my own voice. So you're missing nothing. And you're welcome. -Richard
Rose  Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 2:45 PM
Ah, A little mystery goes a long way when sharing poetry. Was she real? or just a figment. guess I'll neve know, nice verse Richard.
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 4:20 PM
Mystic Rose, You know how when you meet someone for the first time, and feel like you've known them your whole life? She surely exists, with a heartbeat as real as you and I. The idea of her, sound of her voice, caress of her skin, and smell of her hair. That's what became only a the figment, what I can't let go. -Richard
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 1:39 PM
Interesting work. It reads like a person to get far away from and stay away. Thanks for the visit to my poem. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 5:46 AM
Yes, when we love someone they never leave us but the memories can gradually fade away and become less and less. Always there will be something that will trigger a memory though. After my mother's death a really long time, a was shopping and the scent from soap made me weep. Sara
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 4:00 PM
Sara, Thank you for the comment and for that practical advice. I am so very very far away from her. Many time zones and mountain ranges away. And yet she is still right here, inside me. Not by choice of either I'm sure. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 12:34 PM
This is very unusual. I really enjoyed reading it even if I still believe somehow she was not just a fig "newton" ment. (I tole that from Gershon!
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Andrea, Hello and thanks for the comments. Unusual is what I was going for. Yes, she is real. I wanted so badly to hold her hand that day I walked her to class. -Richard
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Great imagination and such arguments. Wonderful poem. ~~
Theraven Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Victor, Thank you for that. The discussion goes on and on. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 6:37 PM
We used to say humorously, 'back in the day,' -- 'Aw, she's just a 'fig newton' of your imagination... lol. Tender write, Richard. Great denouement! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Theraven Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Gershon, Thanks for the comment. Thanks for the fig newton and humour all the days. And double thanks for the new word! -Richard
Sands Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:11 PM
This is so powerful. A deep poem that is thought provoking and full of feelings too. Well written! :)
Theraven Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Heidi. Decided to blame all problems in life on the COVID quarantine. -Richard
Dawn Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Eerily like the saga of Josh and Tara. Like you crept right inside my head. and worded better than i could my own life!!! Bravo!
Theraven Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Thank you for living it. Blame it on the COVID-19, and all the days locked in quarantine. -Uncle
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