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Fight To the End

Struggling for air, Hiding the pain, Fighting to stay awake, They need me here, I can't give in, Not now not here, I have to keep going, It is only fair. Just one more inning, How hard can it be? I need to relax, Get some air. I hope they are prepared. With the crack of the bat I was on my way, I can't breathe, I can't see, Will someone yell? Help me out please. Around the bases I went, Gasping for air. That was it, The game was over. Down I went, I was pleased, I fought to the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/31/2010 2:08:00 PM
wow! again very beautiful write! i love your writing!! Thank you for the comment on my last one!..i really do think im done though...idk of anything..love is all i got, and its the only thing i enjoy writing about but i idk...i will try my best to continue! --LOVE Devon--=)
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:03:00 PM
Good fun
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Date: 11/25/2009 11:09:00 AM
Good game, not ease the pain, and enjoy the fame.Smile! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 11/15/2009 12:18:00 PM
Good write, Courtney! Please keep on writing and sharing your talent with us on PS! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:22:00 PM
Inspirational. At times I have felt like throwing in the towel, but words like these have always kept me pushing forward. great poem. keep writing.
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this afternoon Courtney. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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