Raquel P Poet Rhyme

Fight To Love

The first battle is always the hardest they say
But what if the pain never goes away?
I fought for you, I gave my blood
I thought relief would come like a flood
But being with you didn't heal me
In fact it only brought misery
You were vicious, your words hurt
You treated me like I was nothing but dirt
But in my pain I fought to love you
It seems I fail at everything I do

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Jslambert Mister Roboto August 12, 2011 at 10:39 PM I lived inside a hell of one of these effed up relationships. The sting brings pain and rain, but beauty lives in the blood of the stain.

Zzzzz Zzzzz April 28, 2011 at 3:06 AM Life and love can be hard or cruel. We have to battle on, believing that better times can and do lay ahead. A poignant write.

Manouchka Doreus April 4, 2011 at 1:51 PM so many people go through that... my heart goes out to them

Debbie Guzzi March 19, 2011 at 5:22 PM If it is that hard it's probably not right, God works in mysterious ways! welcome to Soup! Light & Love

Cecil Hickman March 19, 2011 at 3:22 PM a definitely detailed write of the love and respect not returned,,unfortunately love can be one sided and sometimes they take advantage of that love,,felt the feelings that you conveyed within,,,and Thank You for reading and leaving your words behind upon mine,,Blessings..Cecil