Fifty Pence

I paid a visit to my grandparents house one Sunday afternoon
I heard grandpa having a bit of a grouse in the living room
I only want fifty pence , He said , For a lovely pint of beer
Grandma's face turned a shade of red that grandpa knew to fear.

but when he saw me standing there he thought he'd have another go
''Listen love its just not fair'', I've worked all week as you well  know
My throat is parched , I'm very dry I've been all week down the pit
Gran said ,  ''you could make a glass eye cry but your still not getting it,

Then he took her in his arms and kissed her tenderly
I knew she'd fallen for his charms when she winked at me 
Grandma said , ''ok you win '' taking fifty pence from her purse
Grandpa gave me a victorious grin then went to quench his thirst .

He returned a few hours later a little unsteady on his feet
He'd bought grandma a packet of peanuts which he gave her as a treat
They wriggled and giggled on the sofa as he gave her a lovely kiss 
I will love them forever for leaving me memories like this .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/3/2014 2:09:00 AM
Darren, this really touched my heart and made me teary eyed because of the talented way you expressed the tenderness of your grandparents! A truly beautiful uplifting write. #7
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Date: 5/31/2014 2:03:00 AM
They will be forever in your heart Daz. Your loved ones may be gone but your memories of them and the times you shared are precious. They will always live on and the influence they had on you shapes the people we are today. I never had proper grandparents and I was so envious of my friends when i was growing up saying they were going to tea at grannies or telling me what fun they had. hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 5/30/2014 10:41:00 PM
A grand story Darren...I need a pint right about now.
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