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Fiery Mare

Its been cold ...very cold........ I can’t feel my part of soul.... The ray of shine eaten by fog.... I m lonely standing alone in the road...... Leaved by someone grabbed by no one.... Make myself to run in the path.... Leaving the fear of fall apart... Don’t care how i m going to find the path.... Just decided to follow my heart... It was cold ....very cold Its just the cold frighten me so... And fog was there for confusing me all... But the light of faith was still in there... Giving me warmth of doing all fair... I stopped somewhere ....some light was there I follow the light but nobody alive there.... I faced the dead on that path.... Feeling so cold very cold...... Then i woke from sleep....and realise it was dream I opened my eyes my makers were there waking me up.... From that fiery mare.... They saw my face as it was pale ... I grabbed them tight and decided to leave them never......

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Date: 2/19/2016 9:39:00 PM
awesome poem, LINDA
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Manu Singh Tanwar
Date: 12/17/2016 10:56:00 AM
thank you linda
Date: 11/16/2015 7:35:00 AM
Feeling that fog, that fear of unknowing what is in front of you, that is a hard feeling to shake, but you wake from the fog and hold on to something that feels right. That is a successful story.
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Manu Singh Tanwar
Date: 11/16/2015 8:04:00 AM
thank you casarah......i m really thankful to you and poetrysoup

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